Tuesday 4 March 2014

One pitch black night I herd a howl it sounded like this. Howoooo Howoooo. I creeped down the steps and instead of howling I herd a creek. When I got to the bottom there was a boom! I looked around it was a broken washing machine.
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  1. Unknown5 March 2014 at 08:34

    Liam, this made me laugh out loud. What a great idea and what a relief! Your opening sentence is great because it introduces the setting clearly.

    Next time, use speech marks to show the sounds - "Howooo, howooo." even though its only a washing machine.

    Great job Liam!

    Miss S
    5SC

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  2. Anonymous2 July 2014 at 01:03

    Awesome short story Liam

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